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Joseph O'Connor: My Father's House (2023, Europa Editions, Incorporated) 1 star

A mundane fiction of thrilling true life events

1 star

I tend not to like books I feel I could have done a better job writing myself and 'My Father's House' is no exception.

What it amounts to is a good third draft in need of a hard pruning. Too often the author's descriptions grasp for quantity over quantity; using similes as if each came with a monetary commission. We are treated to superfluous descriptions of places and actions so much so that the first half of the book is nothing but.

Despite this, the characters wind up feeling half-baked even though they are allocated copious pages to tell their story. At a point in the middle it seems they've been rounded out enough that the reader can comprehend them, but then they unravel again by the end into little more than pastiche cliches.

The plot itself was also rather doddering. The main action doesn't begin until well into the …